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Tuesday, September 12, 2017

The girl from the forgotten


Not that long ago Te Ngahere had to write a narrative about anything in our chose.We had lots of fun writing it my story was called the girl from the forgotten here is my writing to and I hope you enjoy it.

4 comments:

  1. Hola Avalea
    I'm Holly and I am from Grey Main School and I am a Year 8 student. I really like your story because you describe the scene very well. I think next time you could just go through and check some of your spelling? What is your favourite scene or paragraph in your writing?
    Come and check out my blog! http://hollys112014.blogspot.co.nz/
    Holly

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  2. Bonjour Ava,
    I really like The Girl From The Forgotten! It is really interesting and I just want to read more and more. I really like the way you describe the girls.I love writing and reading narratives. Maybe next time you could check your spelling.
    Au Revoir,
    Tessa.

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  4. Hi Ava
    I'm Brooklyn and I go Panmure Bridge School. Your narrative about the Girl From The Forgotten sounds like a mystery. I like writing and I like reading story's. Keep the work up.
    Brooklyn

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